*hyperventilates* omg omg omg! That was amazing! So much tension! and Edward's anger and determination is felt throughout the whole scene. I love Jacob's silent agression but protective instincts which is a true reflection of him as a person and a wolf. Willy sounds freaking adorable! I just love the Volturi. They're so evil yet classy and civilized. And you nailed it. U set the scene as part of a full story but I also love the open ending that leaves the reader's imagination to fill in the rest. Words cannot express my gratitude. This made my week! I can't stop squeeing and plus I have to do something awesome for you. Okay I'll stop ranting now....have a wonderful New Year! -Faith
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