Just for the heck of it went back and read the story again. **sigh** still kinda feel the same sympathy for Jazz - but he did voluntarily leave Seth and Forks. The second reading made me realize the 'hook' you inserted in the story; both felt the need to return home. From abroad Jasper felt the pull to return to Forks, and Seth, believing he's dying needs to return to make arrangements for his son.
Do you think you'll ever write a story about an adult Luka? That would be an interesting read. Especially as you have him imprinting on Em.
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Date: 2010-12-22 03:30 am (UTC)The second reading made me realize the 'hook' you inserted in the story; both felt the need to return home. From abroad Jasper felt the pull to return to Forks, and Seth, believing he's dying needs to return to make arrangements for his son.
Do you think you'll ever write a story about an adult Luka? That would be an interesting read. Especially as you have him imprinting on Em.