I did have "But, since it had only been three days since the last time I didn't see the point" in there but my beta told me to take it out. -shrugs-
Other than that I'm glad I nailed the angst perfectly. Even though this was based on a scene in a book it was really hard to write.
I honestly hope so too. But I feel like it would be one of those things where Jasper would always be competing for Seth's love no matter how much like dirt Jacob treated him.
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Date: 2011-09-10 02:10 pm (UTC)Other than that I'm glad I nailed the angst perfectly. Even though this was based on a scene in a book it was really hard to write.
I honestly hope so too. But I feel like it would be one of those things where Jasper would always be competing for Seth's love no matter how much like dirt Jacob treated him.