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Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Jacob/Edward
Prompt: Wolf prints and rose petals


Bella sighed as she raked the leaves around the side of the house. Charlie had gotten tired of her spending so much time with Edward again so she was grounded for the weekend. She hated being away from Edward so much. She felt… empty without him.

A gust of wind swept through the yard, blowing her neat pile of leaves toward the woods. Bella groaned and stomped over to rake them up again. She was just getting the last few when she noticed something caught on the one of the rungs of her rake. With a frown she pulled the end closer, thinking it was just a leaf caught, but when she got it close to her face (nearly poking herself in the eye) she saw it was a rose petal.

A rose petal?’ She thought. Suddenly a smile broke out on her face. Edward! He must be waiting in the woods for her! Bella glanced back toward the house, she could just barely hear a game playing on the TV, one Charlie was surely absorbed in. Letting the rake drop she headed into the woods following the trail of rose petals.

Walking along the trail, tripping over a root now and then, Bella couldn’t help the feel of excitement that filled her. How she ever lived without Edward was beyond her. Glancing down to make sure she was still on the trail she saw what looked like a large paw print in the mud. ‘Strange,’ she thought with a frown. But she shrugged. One of the La Push wolves must have been in the woods after that morning’s rain. It had probably been Seth on his way to play video games at the Cullen’s.

Yes.”

The groan made Bella stop. That sounded like… Edward? After a moment she continued toward the sound. There were some more groans; another voice joining the one she thought was Edward’s. Bella frowned, what was going on?

Bella came to a branch. The voices were louder now. They had to be just on the other side. Reaching out she slowly pulled the branch down. The sight that greeted her was not anything he had expected.

Edward and Jacob were there. Naked. And…and Jacob was-was… Bella let go of the branch. She couldn’t believe what she had just seen.

Edward and Jacob were having sex! And Edward was bottoming for Jacob! Bella couldn’t believe it.

Date: 2011-08-28 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
I liked BPOV; her tripping over the roots and her thought processes. It's a pity she was bitterly disappointed at the end ;)

Date: 2011-08-28 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
Haha, that's what Starry said. I might have to write another where she's... intrigued.

Date: 2011-08-28 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com
Oh Thank You! This was just perfect ! I love the way you wrote Bella and the ending YAY for bottom! Edward Edward and Jacob were there. Naked. And…and Jacob was-was… Bella let go of the branch. She couldn’t believe what she had just seen. I love that



*hugs*

Date: 2011-08-28 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
-hugs- Glad you loved it! Sorry it took me so long to write.

Date: 2011-08-28 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com
Oh Honey I know your life has been hetic, It was worth the wait, *hugs*

Date: 2011-08-28 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] every9seconds.livejournal.com
lol epic ending.

Date: 2011-08-28 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
-grin- Glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-08-28 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

Awesome. Loved Bella getting the wind knocked out of her sails. More please!

Date: 2011-08-28 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-28 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deezy-y.livejournal.com
lol... oh, you better believe it. loved it!

Date: 2011-08-28 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
:D Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-29 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovergyul.livejournal.com
Loved it! Loved Bottom Edward! Oh yeah! I can only imagine the sheer power of Jake's thrusts. (Licking my lips) Lol! Love that Bella caught them. Wish she liked what she saw. Lol!

Date: 2011-08-29 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
She just might... I think she was in just a bit of shock.

Date: 2011-08-29 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ingrid44.livejournal.com
Aha the truth is finally out! Yes!! Though it was a wee bit hurtful, her finding out by watching them 'in the act'. Hehehehe, finally!

Date: 2011-08-29 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
-snicker- Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-08-31 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebloodlust23.livejournal.com
Loved it alot. Still wish there some story were Edward was top. I have read some story's like that but most of them Edward was really dominateing but regardless i still liked it.

Date: 2011-08-31 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avari-maethor.livejournal.com
Actually... most Jakeward stories have Edward on top. I don't know why, that just seems to be the norm.

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