Drabble: Wow
Mar. 12th, 2012 10:23 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
elvenavariFandom: Twilight
Pairing: Edward/Seth
Prompt: Wow
Seth and Edward lay on their backs, staring up at the ceiling while their hearts returned to a normal rhythm. A sheet from Edward’s bed covered their otherwise naked bodies. Seth glanced over at Edward, bringing a hand up to run it through his black hair. “Wow…” He breathed.
“Yeah… wow,” Edward echoed. He paused, brows drawing together in a twinge of confusion. “Hold on, that didn’t sound like a good ‘wow’. Why wow?”
“Um. I guess…that we finally just got together and…did it,” Seth answered, his lips quirking at the corners as he looked at Edward. They had only been dancing around each other for months, dating here and there but never going that far.
“Yeah, it’s true.”
Seth sighed and turned his gaze back to the ceiling. “Wait. Why? What was your wow about?” He propped himself up on one elbow. “I mean, the sex was…great too, don’t get me wrong.”
Edward also propped himself up so that his gaze was level with Seth’s. “Seth, I think it’s safe to say that what we had was in no way anywhere near wow sex.”
Seth stared for just a second before he busted out laughing. “Oh my God, thank God, I am so relieved.” They both started laughing.
“Did you really think that I thought it was great sex?” Edward asked.
“It was terrible, it might have been ‘wow, that was terrible sex’,” Seth laughed.
Edward chuckled but then sobered up. “Well, it wasn’t that bad, I’ve had worse.”
“I’m not sure I have,” Seth laughed and fell back against the pillow. Edward couldn’t help himself; he laughed and did the same.
A/N: Totally stole this conversation (pretty much) from the TV show SMASH. If you haven’t watched it you should!
Pairing: Edward/Seth
Prompt: Wow
Seth and Edward lay on their backs, staring up at the ceiling while their hearts returned to a normal rhythm. A sheet from Edward’s bed covered their otherwise naked bodies. Seth glanced over at Edward, bringing a hand up to run it through his black hair. “Wow…” He breathed.
“Yeah… wow,” Edward echoed. He paused, brows drawing together in a twinge of confusion. “Hold on, that didn’t sound like a good ‘wow’. Why wow?”
“Um. I guess…that we finally just got together and…did it,” Seth answered, his lips quirking at the corners as he looked at Edward. They had only been dancing around each other for months, dating here and there but never going that far.
“Yeah, it’s true.”
Seth sighed and turned his gaze back to the ceiling. “Wait. Why? What was your wow about?” He propped himself up on one elbow. “I mean, the sex was…great too, don’t get me wrong.”
Edward also propped himself up so that his gaze was level with Seth’s. “Seth, I think it’s safe to say that what we had was in no way anywhere near wow sex.”
Seth stared for just a second before he busted out laughing. “Oh my God, thank God, I am so relieved.” They both started laughing.
“Did you really think that I thought it was great sex?” Edward asked.
“It was terrible, it might have been ‘wow, that was terrible sex’,” Seth laughed.
Edward chuckled but then sobered up. “Well, it wasn’t that bad, I’ve had worse.”
“I’m not sure I have,” Seth laughed and fell back against the pillow. Edward couldn’t help himself; he laughed and did the same.
A/N: Totally stole this conversation (pretty much) from the TV show SMASH. If you haven’t watched it you should!
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Date: 2012-03-13 02:51 am (UTC)I loved how they could laugh about the less than super sexual performance, and I have to give you kudos for including a less than stellar sexual experience. It's not something you see or even hear about in fanfiction very much.
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